41410 Daisy Lane
Princeton, BC
V2R 7L9
May 17, 2007
Grad Parent Committee
4081 Clearbrook Road
Abbotsford, BC
V4X 2M8
Dear Grad Parent Committee,
I want to start off by saying thank you for all of your time and effort that was put into planning our grad events. I really appreciate the thought behind all of our activities; I do, however, have a few suggestions for next year.
As a student, I was very confused about which events were happening and how to pay for them. I felt it was not very organized, and I didn’t even really understand what was happening until the day all of our information was supposed to be handed in. Getting the information and filling it out, in itself, was a challenge, let-alone handing it in and paying for it.
For next year’s grad class, I really think there should be a schedule made, outlining when each event is happening and when it needs to be paid for and handed in, a week or more before the due date.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and consider my thoughts.
Sincerely,
Alanna Pool
Princeton, BC
V2R 7L9
May 17, 2007
Grad Parent Committee
4081 Clearbrook Road
Abbotsford, BC
V4X 2M8
Dear Grad Parent Committee,
I want to start off by saying thank you for all of your time and effort that was put into planning our grad events. I really appreciate the thought behind all of our activities; I do, however, have a few suggestions for next year.
As a student, I was very confused about which events were happening and how to pay for them. I felt it was not very organized, and I didn’t even really understand what was happening until the day all of our information was supposed to be handed in. Getting the information and filling it out, in itself, was a challenge, let-alone handing it in and paying for it.
For next year’s grad class, I really think there should be a schedule made, outlining when each event is happening and when it needs to be paid for and handed in, a week or more before the due date.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter and consider my thoughts.
Sincerely,
Alanna Pool

1 comment:
a very formal and pleasant letter. Good suggestion too!
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